2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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With the number of traveller soaring.Travelling has always been a common penomenon existing among the modern people.It has drawn much attention around our country.More and more people want to visit China. There are two reasons to account for this phenomenon.On the one hand.Travelling has become part of our lives and everybodys like it very much.We can learn more advanced knowledge and eat some delicious foods.One the other hand. Traveller can gain a lot from a trip.likes goods and foods. As far as I am concerned.China is a very wonderful place and my foreign friend will like there.