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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；加强长句的练习，会取得更不错的成绩；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。
With the number of traveller soaring.Travelling has always been a common phenomenon existing among the modern people.It has drawn much attention around our country.More and more people want to visit China. There are two reasons to account for this phenomenon.On the one hand.Travelling has become part of our lives and everybodys like it very much.We can learn more advanced knowledge and eat some delicious foods.One the other hand. Traveller can gain a lot from a trip.likes goods and foods. As far as I am concerned.China is a very wonderful place and my foreign friend will like there.
