2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；错误句子较少，可适当增加一些复杂句的使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

With the number of Internet users soaring.Onine Shopping has become part of our lives and has drawn much attention around the country.Online Shopping has always been a common phenomenon existing among the modern people. There are two reasons to account for this phenomenon.On the one hand.People usually play with their computer in everywhere.So they find it much convenient to buy what the like at the first sight regardless of the else.On the other hand.Online Shopping can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people's privacy.It is a very terrible things. As far as I am concerned.The Internet has become more and more importance in our lives.Everybody should adjust their attitudes and discourage from overusing Online Shopping.