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计算机在我们的工作、生活中的作用越来越大， 你知道计算机的起源于发展吗？请就计算机的发明时间（1946年)、大小、用途等方面，谈一下它的发展变化，并说明你对未来计算机的畅想。
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1.意见连贯，语句通顺；
2.词数不少于80词；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers? Computer was invented in 1946. At that time, The machine was huge and it was as large as a big house. It weighed about 30 tons. Computer is a very useful tool in our life, in our study as well as works. For example, computer can send some messages to foreign friends by E-mail. The computer can open our eyes to let us know more. It's hard to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers in our daily life. And in my opinion, computers are going to change our life completely in the near future. I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.
