2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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The topic of Computer is becoming most popular one recently,there are two sides of opinions about it,Some people say that computer make our live more convience ,but some other people do not agree with them,they think computer bring much troubles. first,computer has its roles in many faces of our life,we cannot do something without them,