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It‘s not sensible that we judgeing things only by our eyes.What you see provide you a direct impression on our mind.But sometimes eyes can cheat you which is different from what you see and what you guess. Take an tipycal example that I heard bofore.Most of us know the story of 《beauty and beast》,At the begining of the story,we saw a rude and bad-temped beast,however,as time went by,beauty get along well with the beast,gradually,she found some charminng features that she ever realized.EVen though beast is not handsome in his appearance,finally he win the love of the beauty. In our daily life,we often make mistakes such as judging a book by It's cover,in fact,we need to read put our heart into it,then you can really know the book is goog or bad.
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