2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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hello,friend.i know you very like my hometown ,and you also wonder to know my hometown how it is. firstly,my hometown is a beautiful village ,that is localed of ShanXi.it have a lot of histroic culture.but i want to make you look the HanJiang river,because it is root of my hometown.it burn us to become better. i very happy you is able to wactch my hometown.