题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句式变化多样;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
Trust is a key to open the door between peoples.Not only for our family,school and company,but also strangers in first meeting time,we should trust each others,It's the best gift we express our sencerity to people. Parents trust children so children with the encourage of parent's finally attain their goals,illness tust doctor ,doctor will try their best to cure the illness,people trust govenment , the govenment will help people solve troubles as they can。 Believe it or not,trust has a power makes people become brave and stonger,which telles you are not only one to fight.So turst makes us closer and more powerful.