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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views. “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”
单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；采用了一些简单的从句；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
from long long ago,the science has detail number on something ,so we have tv computer and so on the art has no detail ,just has the thought,has no fact on it.so it will make us upset . every coin has tow sides ,so science is the better one .let us believe the truth .thank you
