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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,the amazing rapidly development of science and technology turns the whole world into the village.Therefore,communication among people is more and more convenient for us.For instance,we can chat with families or friends who are abroad or living away from long distance. That is no denying that significance are attached on the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication.Nevertheless,we should realize the real world is more wonderful than the virtual world.To begin with,obviously,the impact of the Internet is so wild that we can use it fully and properly.It's a great tool.Secondly,we should be wise and cautious when we confront the temptation on the Internet. Last but not least,we should be looking for beauty from the real world.At the same time,we should look forward to the meaning of the life. From my perspective,we can't ignore the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication,but we should also find the nature of life and make our lives more meaningful .

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