2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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With the enconomic developing,more and more people can use cell phone.Maybe it make usto live happiness.But it lead us to strange. As we know,cell phone let us to know the world all.People use cell phone to explore some information what they want and see film what they love.Of course it can let us to communicate with more people.