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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确。

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In this day and age,most of family,if not all,merely to improve the material standards of living but psychologically healthy is ignored.Nevertheless,mental problem causes a diversity of diseases sometimes.While this problem is in its infancy,it does deserve our urgent attention. Some reasons are accountable for this phenomenon.On the one hand,with rapid social and economic development,employment pressure is extremely increasing which maybe lead to a growing number of people are faced with unemployment.On the other hand,some people,especial a host of young adults,are not supported on a series of innovative ideas and then they easily lose heart even do not keen to communicate with other. On my personal level,your mental attitude will have profound impact on your life journey.Selecting effective measures to ease psychologically problem is a must.For instance,we are supposed to see psychologist regular in order to relieve our pressure.What's more,absorbing your parents or friends advice and communicating with them is a wonderful approach.Only in this way can prospect of keeping psychologically healthy be brighter.

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