小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend whose name is paul.The day we meeted is a shine day,when I paly football on the playground,and my friend,paul,come.He said ,can i join? of course,i said.So after that,we become good friend.paul is a shine boy,he always brings us passitive energy. Now,when we remind thoese time, a smile will on our faces.