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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。
As the drawing vividly demonstrates,two individuals who take a boat to enjoy their journey leave too much rubbish after they have had kinds of junk food.The surface of the river is soon covered with a variety of plastic garbage so that the beautiful river looks ugly.Under the cartoon reads 'the remains of a journey'. The potential implication of the drawing aims to remind us of the issue of environmental pollution.The matter of the environment has been gradually deteriorating and has been brought into a wide public attention.Many reasons are responsible for the phenomenon.For one thing,the young fail to take the environmental conservation seriously.They give priority to the enjoyment of the journey without giving any consideration to nature and ecology balance.For another,the tour agent fails to provide an effective measure to rubbish left by tourist.Further,the government also plays an irreplaceable role in it. To address the issue,effective measures should be taken.First,the customers should come to the realization of the severe consequences.Second,the scientists are supposed to offer some constructive suggestions and create more disposable material to offer a radical solution to our environment.Third,the government also shoulders some responsibilities,for it launches less relevant laws and regulations to penalize those who throw garbage anywhere.Only make joint efforts,can our environment get sustainable and healthy development.