2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China,Guangzhou is a extremely beautify city. In Guangzhou, peoples are nice, foods are delicious, environment is clear, and so on.You can visit the Guangzhou Tower,the China Museum, the Guangzhou universities, the Guangzhou Zoo, and the others place. The Guangzhou Tower is one of the highest towers in China. Get to the top on the Guangzhou Tower, you can see nearly the whole of Guangzhou in a sunny day.But you can't see nothing in a rainy day.