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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1944
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分55.0分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请作者词汇表达更加灵活多变一些,也请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,a phenomenon haa aroused wide concern that Wasting in university.Why does such issue aroused?The reasons I think can be listed an follow. First of all,our living stand has rised and we care less about waste.Then our traditionary cluture is disapper.Last but not least,we have not the view to save. It is high time we took some effortive measures to solve the problems.On the one hand,ourselves shoud resist this bad phenomenon.On the other hand our goverment should thougt the right opinion and emphasize triditionary cluture. There in no one but longs to live in a waste society.If we do our utmost tosolve the problem,I firmly blieve that this phenomenon will be risisred.

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