2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China,Guangzhou is a beautify city. In Guangzhou, peoples are nice, foods are delicious, environment is clear, and so on.You can visit the Guangzhou Tower,the China Museum, the Guangzhou universities, the Guangzhou Zoo, and the others place. The Guangzhou Tower is one of the highest towers in China. Get to the top on the Guangzhou Tower, you can see nearly the whole of Guangzhou in a sunny day.But you can't see nevertheless in a rainy day.Also, you can take the Ferris wheel on the top of this tower.You can not only take the subway to the China Museum,but also go to the biggest library in Guangzhou. In the China Museum,you can see a lot of special thing which you can't see even before.