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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1950
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,a phenomenon has aroused wide concern that Wasting in university.Why does such issue aroused?The reasons I think can be listed as follow. First of all,our living stand has raised and we care less about waste.Then our traditionary culture is disapper.Last but not least,we haven't the view to save. It is high time we took some effective measures to solve the problems.On the one hand,ourselves shoud resist this bad phenomenon.On the other hand our government should spread the right opinion and emphasize traditionary culture. There in no one but longs to live in a waste society.If we do our utmost to solve the problem,I firmly blieve that this phenomenon will be resisted.

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