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sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
注：第一段已给出，不计入总数
With more and more cars coming into our families,we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.But unluckily,it has also brought many problems,such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
加强局势的变化，会取得更好的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且要加强拼写检查；请注意分段。
So we everyone must keep the traffic rule, just walk on the sidewalk or zdbra-corssing. Never palying the ball on the street and road. Thus we can avoid traffic happening or inducing traffic accidents. We must pursuade our parent never drinking if they need drive the car. If everyone in the world can do like this, it will be avoided many traffic accidents to be happened, and we could live happaier and safty.
