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2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:08浏览次数:6502
要求:
题目 看图作文:旅程之“余”(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning

3.Give your comments

用户的作文(系统评分92.0分
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文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

As is demonstrated in the drawing above,two tourists who take a boat to enjoy the scenery throw a massive amounts of rubbish after they have had lots of junk food.Covered with a variety of garbage,the river lost its inherent beauty.And under the cartoon reads 'the left of a journey'. The potential implication of the drawing aims to remind us of the urgent issue of environmental conservation.Some corporation and firm give birth to a host of rubbish,which will curb sustainable development and be overwhelmed with the survival of human beings.Some maintain that environmental conservation is a trivial thing,nevertheless,it frequently occurs that a single unimportant event sets up a chain of reactions which lays a solid foundation for our career and destiny.On the contrary,if we take it lightly and are obsessed with self-enjoyment,chances are that we will pay higher price on what we did,let alone to lead a wonderful life. Effective measures should be taken to address the issue.For one thing,individuals should come to the realization that a harmonious nature will provide a platform for making a living and transform from one who throw rubbish to one who protect the environment instead.For another,the government should set relevant laws and regulations to penalize those who pollute our environment.Only make the joint efforts,can this issue be tackled completely.

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