2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇量积累不错，能较准确地使用学术词汇，单词拼写要仔细；文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Nowadays,computer has been viewed as one of the most essential elements of individual and social development with its powerful function.One topic now under debate is whether the computer can take place of the role of man at work especailly in manufacturing industy. From my point view,the computer can never replace the man totally although it indeed can make up for labour shortage and improve work efficiency in some areas. The reasons why I insist on the viewpoint above mainly lie in the following two aspects.To begin with,it is an invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing can stay still even for just one second.So are things happening around us.Unstable and changeable factors can not be taken into consideration when making decisions by the computer.On the contrary,people are more subjective and full of emotions so that they can insight into uncontrollable particals.In addition to that,as is known to us,we have created the computer just as a manchine to replace simple and repeated human labor,so it is identified that computers are quite far away from human's intelligence. To sum up,I would suggest that we should never rely on computers' work altogether.Combination of our own logic thinking and computers' objective calculation can be a wonderful way to perfect our work.