2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章用词灵活多样，学术词汇使用也比较准确；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

Nowadays,computer has been viewed as one of the most essential elements of individual and social development with its powerful function.One topic now under debate is whether the computer can take the place of the role of man at work especially in manufacturing industry. From my point view,the computer can never replace the man totally although it indeed can make up for labour shortage and improve work efficiency in some areas. The reasons why I insist on the viewpoint above mainly lie in the following two aspects.To begin with,it is an invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing can stay still even for just one second.So are things happening around us.Unstable and changeable factors can not be taken into consideration when making decisions by the computer.On the contrary,people are more subjective and full of emotions so that they can get insight into uncontrollable particles.In addition to that,as is known to us,we have created the computer just as a machine to replace simple and repeated human labor,so it is identified that computers are quite far away from human's intelligence. To sum up,I would suggest that we should never rely on computers' work altogether.Combination of our own logic thinking and computers' objective analyzetion can be a wonderful way to perfect our work.