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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分49.5分
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行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Appeareance is an important part of a person.in all ages,attension appearance is our must to do.nonethless,it is unwise to judge a person by thier appearance.because expant apperance,our inherent is most importen.a hummen's ability and knowledge,can not measure with appearance.such as,if someone get a beauty look,but their so konwless and not goal,their loaf.and someone heart sinister,those people,we most do not like them no one can deny the fact.so as far as i can see.when we judge someone ,we not only form thire appearance but also from their inside,their konwledge and their ability. that's wise.

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