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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Appeareance is an important part of a person.In all ages,attension appearance is our must be.nonetheless,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.Because in addition to appearance,our inherent is most important.a humen's ability and knowledge,can not measure with appearance.such as,if someone get a beauty look,but their so konwless and not goal,their loaf.and someone heart sinister,those people,we most do not like them no one can deny the fact.so as far as i can see.when we judge someone ,we not only form thire appearance but also from their inside,their konwledge and their ability. that's wise.
