2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请作者词汇表达更加灵活多变一些，也请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

The consequences of overusing cell phone As it betray in the illustration,people are crossing the street only staring at their cell phones and using walking sticks instead of their eyes. With the advanced of the society,the cell phones have spread throughout all over the world,and increasingly more problems are brought to our attation,one of these is the phonmenon above the picture. Ample reasons can be acount for the phonmenon,the folllowings might be the critral ones.The main reason is that cell phone has becom the most spreadful communication equpment,many a people exchang information by it. In additon,the cell phone is extremely useful.For example,people can see movies on the cell phone wherever he is. Last but not least,cell phone which can offer various play games very appeal people's eyes. In spite of all these,there are many ways to solve it.TO begain with,people should contral our time of using cell phone.Moreover,it is a good idea to spend more stay with families and friends instead of using cell phone.Only in that way,can we make full use of cell phone in right way.