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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8984
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
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有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;从句数量稍显不足,注意增加从句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

People pay attention to outward appearance very much.Since the ancient times,Pay attention to outward appearance is something we will do.Nonetheless,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.Except for appearance,our inherent is most important.A human's ability and knowledge,can not measure with appearance.Such as,Although some people has a beautiful appearance,their lack of knowledge, no goal, dream away your time and another have an evil hear,those people,we most do not like them no one can deny the fact.so as far as I can see.when we judge someone ,we not only form thire appearance but also from their inside,their knowledge and their ability.That's wise.

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