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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11310
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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The consequences of overusing cell phone As it is betray in the illustration,people are crossing the street only staring at their cell phones and using walking sticks instead of their eyes. With the advanced of the society,the cell phones have spread throughout all over the world,and increasingly more problems are brought to our attention,one of these is the phenomenon above the picture. Ample reasons can be account for the phenomenon,the followings might be the critcal ones.The main reason is that cell phone has become the most spreadable communication equipment,many a people exchange information by it. In addition,the cell phone is extremely useful.For example,people can see movies on the cell phone wherever he is. Last but not least,cell phone which can offer various games very appeal people's eyes. In spite of all these,there are many ways to solve it.TO begain with,people should control their time of using cell phone.Moreover,it is a good idea to spend more stay with families and friends instead of using cell phone.Only in that way,can we make full use of cell phone in the right way.

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