Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。
I‘m feel very happy since I know you are going to visit my hometown:sichuan.Sichuan is a beautiful city with a lot of historical buildings and views whether.Whether you do know sichuan or not,sichuan is a very fantastic city.The dujjiangyan Dam is the one that I'm most proud of.It is a very grand building in ancient China.Chinese people are all amazed with it.Becanse it is very difficult to build it in ancient without any machines.It's the wise of Chinese people.There is a mountain named qicheng mountain near it.It is a beautiful mountain with beautiful views.So I ensure you that you will have a good time here.I'm looking foward to your visiting!