Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫,有些单词拼错了。
With the increasing development of communication tools,we can contact well with eath other no matter where and when and have no concern about losing touch.However,this progess also has the bad impact on our daily life,which cause apathy,loneliness,and hypocrity problems. Take a look at this picture--A mother called her son to eat by email when she was just downstairs and her son was just upstairs.Why would not the mother come up to say that rather than send an email?Ileness may be an explanation,but more importantly,the lifestyle of depending on the electronic toos overly shoud be to blame.Talking online take place communication face to face,resulting a big social problem we must confronted with. To make this problem deal with,everyony of us need to take a part in this activity that spend perninent time chitchating and playing online.All in all,contacting face to face will always play an significant role in our life.