2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

From what is vividly depicted in the cartoons,we can observe distinctly that when there is protection,the flower blooms beautifully while it is exposed directly to the wind and rain,the flower withers quickly.Consequently,we can surely come to the conclusion that flowers in greenhouses cannot withstand the storm. We can obtain a plenty of revelations from the cartoons.For instance,as most of the families only have one children,more and more parents overprotect their children.When their parents do everything for them,these children seem to be healthy and happy.But when they leave home,they will usually feel disappointed and frustrated.Facing harsh things that they have never experienced before,they will be at a loss,miserable or even desperate.In fact,the more protection they get from their parents,the less ability they achieve.Love from parents turns out to be a disaster. Children,like flowers,should be treated with care,but reasonable and sensible ways of doing things will help to bring about fruitful results.If not only do we love our children but also teach them how to love,our love will be passed down from generation to generation.