作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Nowadays,the goods on the market are more and more delicate and attractive. And this has made customers more likely to buy it. Nevertheless,the quality of the goods in it is not as good as we think. And this phenomenon is called excessive packing. The reason I think, on the one hand, with the development the economics and the improvement of people's lives, people are willing to buy things that are more exquisite and don't pay enough attention to the commodity itself. On the other hand, what the seller do can give the customers a illusion that the goods is so expensive that we are worthy to spend more money on it. Such a behavior can increase their interest which will benefit to them. As far as I am concerned, in order to diminish the unfair trade, the goverment should introduce policies concerning the behavior to forbid the fraudulent behavior to protect the consumer interests. What's more, everybody has the responsibilities to supervise it and report it to the relevant administration.