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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9787
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
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学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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Nowadays,the goods on the market are more and more delicate and attractive. And this has made customers more likely to buy it. Nevertheless,the quality of the goods in it is not as good as we think. And this phenomenon is called excessive packing. What have result in it? The reason I think, on the one hand, with the development the economics and the improvement of people's lives, people are willing to buy things that are more exquisite and don't pay enough attention to the commodity itself. On the other hand, what the seller do can give the customers a illusion that the goods is so expensive that we are worthy to spend more money on it. Such a behavior can increase their interest which will benefit them. As far as I am concerned, in order to diminish the unfair trade, the government should introduce policies concerning the behavior to forbid the fraudulent behavior to protect the consumer interests. What's more, everybody has the responsibilities to supervise it and report it to the relevant administration.

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