学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Nowadays,the goods on the market are more and more delicate and attractive. And this has made customers more likely to buy it. Nevertheless,the quality of the goods in it is not as good as we think. And this phenomenon is called excessive packing. What have result in it? The reason I think, on the one hand, with the development the economics and the improvement of people's lives, people are willing to buy things that are more exquisite and don't pay enough attention to the commodity itself. On the other hand, what the seller do can give the customers a illusion that the goods is so expensive that we are worthy to spend more money on it. Such a behavior can increase their interest which will benefit them. As far as I am concerned, in order to diminish the unfair trade, the government should introduce policies concerning the behavior to forbid the fraudulent behavior to protect the consumer interests. What's more, everybody has the responsibilities to supervise it and report it to the relevant administration.