2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

i will take her to see Bifengxia. it is a good place where she can play. there are many giant pandas that is China's protecting animal.on condition that, Bifengxia's whether is very proper.many trees in the park.of course , there are many animals in the park.such as monkey、tiger、snake and so on. in a word, the place will make you very interested.I am convinced that she will love it.