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Highways or Public Transportation Should governments spend more money in improving roads and highways or in improving public transportation? There seems to be a difficult problem since many reasons should be involved. However, after carefully pondering, I buttress spending the money in improving public transportation. The reasons are presented below: There is no denying that improving public transportation will surely alleviate the pollution caused by numerous cars. If a city has not a developed public transportation, the air will be polluted more heavily. What a dirty environment we will live in! Breathing in the air fill ed with the flavor of the gasoline, seeing the sky with the dull color will be the title of our daily life. Fortunately, the essence of environment has been realized by an increasingly number of people. To the governments, the protection of environment is especially an undeniable mission. Another reason I agree with is that developed public transportation will decrease the frequency of tradfic jams. Perhaps no worse word than “tradfic jams” exists, to the businessmen who believe in “time is money”. Tradfic jams not only cost people the time and expenses, but also create a bad mood for work. It greatly decreases the effiscience of the whole city. How a city whose avenues are full of tradfi c jams can develop its economy. Finally, I want to say that improving public transportation provides ways of transportation for most of poor people who cannot afford to buy a car. It is known that our citizens are not made of people who have the ability to own a car, only I believe that no matter how advanced our society will be, the public apparatus should never be ignored, because it serves people all over the city. Nevertheless, private transportation has its own advantages. For instance, it can save a lot of time in some cases, and provide some conveniences for people. But improving roads and highways is advantageous only conditionally. Based in the above discussion, I agree with the opinion that governments should spend the money in improving public transportation because it can not only protect environment and save time for people, but also create a convenient environment for all the citizens.
