2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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The Increasing Use of The Mobile Phone in People's Life Nowdays,the number of people use mobile phone in their life are increasing.However,when it comes to the phenomenon,people's opinion are vary from person to person. the reason for the phenomenon are divided into following points.Firstly,with the development of technology,the mobile phone has it's own advantages. For example,it's convenient for people to touch with their families and friends who may live far away than ever.Secondly,the mobile phone has interesting video and autio in it.Thus,people like it. personally,the mobile phone also have some bad consequences if you overuse it.It may cause a traffic jam or even a road accident if you use it no matter what you do.What's more,the mobile phone have ray which can harm you eresight. Thus,I think we should use it properly and make the best use of it's benifit.