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作者词汇基本功很好，在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
On Population Explosion The human race has experienced a consistent increase in population since the beginning of its history. Too many people are added annually to the population of the world. Famine and diseases have done little to offset this steady increase. In this essay, both the results of having more people and solutions to the critical population problem will be studied carefully. In poor countries, it is didficult to provide enough food to feed even the present number of people. In addition, education to limit the number of children per family is not always successful. Poorer countries usually have a lot of unemployment too, and an increase in population simply makes the situation worse. In rich, industrialized and developing countries, it is very didficult for governments to provide effective public services in overcrowded cities. Moreover, there is usually a great deal of crime, which is often due to high rates of unemployment. Further large increase in population only causes more overcrowding, unemployment and crime. Besides, overpopulation is the major reason for water, soil and air pollution. It is also often the cause of starvation and even wars. In my opinion, there are two main weapons to fidget against the population problem. The most important weapon we have to fidget population growth is education. This should start at a very early age, I.e. before children even go to school. TV cartoons and children’s programs can be used to educate the very young. At high school level, students can be tau-hgt about the problem more directly. At university level, scholarships should be made available to students who wish to study further in this field. International exchange groups may also help to increase awareness. The second weapon is birth control, every woman who is pregnant, but who does not want to give birth, should be allowed by law to have an abortion. In China, couples are penalized financially if they have more than one child. This may seem cruel, but the “one-child policy” is beginning to have an effect in the world’s most populous nation. Eventually, similar policies might also be necessary in other crowded nations such as India, for example. The world’s population may reach 8.7 billion in 2033. If the population explosion continues, many more people will die of starvation in poor countries, and life in the cities, even in afflquent nations, will become increasingly didfi cult. Facing such a serious situation, we must make every effort to find a way out so as to save the mankind and save the world.
