2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细。

Computer is more and more important in our dayli life.And people `s life is more and more tighter with computer. Though computer was made by human ,but from then on ,people lost the abalite of working. People writing on compute and working on compute .so ,many people even forget how to write a chinese. And when some people be asked write a compisition , they will search in the net, and copy it. Another ,many people chat with stranger on the net or play the computer game all the day.It is very bad for them