题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
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Perhaps no issue in this world is as significant to us as trust. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should we focus on.I,given the chance,prefer to endorse that maintaining trust should have primary consideration. It goes without saying that if we lost faith with each other,how hard this world would be.