题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。
As the contemporary society develops dramatically, a worrying problem has sprung up that the degree of trust among individuals has decreased. For example, when we meet a man begging for money due to his handicapped leg in the street, we are considering whether he is cheating us. Plus, in the business circle, we consumers couldn't easily believe what the merchant has guaranteed. Perhaps no issue in this world is as significant to us as trust. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should we focus on.I,given the chance,prefer to endorse that maintaining trust should have primary consideration. The underlying reason for these phenomena is that current people fail to trust each other, so keeping trust counts most, because the foundation of any relationship, whether it be with a business associate, spouse, parent, client or, friend, is trust. Trust is not something that can be built with quick fix techniques. Rather, it is something that is cultivated through consistent habits in personal interactions.