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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
From picture,we can see the parents sending an e-mail to their kind.Asking their son：how are you?Looking forward to going down to dinner. This is a phenomenon that many people are insteaded in,whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact?whatdoyou think so?In my opinion,I think electronic communication can not replace face-to-face contact. There are numerous reasons accounting for the topic.I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here,above all,face-to-face contact including emotion.For exmple,the teachers have a class,they can accord to the students'expression and action decide what to teaching.In the other word, electronic communiction can not do this. In addition, electronic communication useing mashie,it can't feel people thinking.Can't choose correct judgement. so face-to-face more imporent than electronic communication.
