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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
From picture,we can see the parents sending an e-mail to their kind.Asking their son：how are you?Looking forward to going down to dinner. This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in,whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact?What do you think so?In my opinion,I think electronic communication can not replace face-to-face contact. There are numerous reasons accounting for the topic.I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here,above all,face-to-face contact including emotion.For example,the teachers have a class,they can accord to the students'expression and action decide to teach.In the other word, electronic communication can not do this. In addition, electronic communication useing mashie,it can't feel people thinking.Can't correct judgement. so face-to-face more imporent than electronic communication.
