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It goes without saying that believe not all that you see nor half what you hear..As we all know,it tells us that something what we have heard or seen may be not a real fact.In some case,what you have heard or seen are the gloss which others manage to let you see or hear on purpose.It makes no sense for us to draw a conclusion when we don't konw much about it.What's worse, it will cause some trouble when we do some groundless verdicts. Many people know the priciple very well because we have heard of it since we were a child.However,they often ignore it when they make a decision or deal with some problems.Just as the old saying says,it's easy said than done.However,it is our duty to take responsibility for what we have said.It is unimaginable that policemen take someone in prison just because somebady tell them that he has stolen her ring.It made no sense so nobady will accept it. Take one of the cases happen in my side as an example.One of my schoolmates hadn't come to school for two weeks.The boy was not good at learning and he had a poor performance in school.Some of my classmate gossiped it after class.They got the news from the boy's class that the boy fell in love with one of the girls and he decided to leave school for work because they want to build a famliy.They also guessed the name of the girl.The news spread all over the school and the girl who was treated as the female leading role was known to everyone in our shool.The most funny thing was that the story developed into another drama that they gave birth of a baby and the would get married.All the thing are from others'mouth even nobady knew the truth.After two weeks,the boy came back and all the people knew that he broke his leg and he was in hospital for a month.How ridicular the story it is! In brief,the above story tells us that we can not draw a conclusion until we do some research or ask the party.
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