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come to the conclusion quickly, Shall we come to the conclusion quickiy? as for it ,people'opinions vary from person to person."thinking twice before action "is a proverb that all of us are familiar with,so in some occasions ,it is unwise to have a quick conclusion whatever we see or listen First and foremost. making the conclusion too quickly will neglect some detils which can not be made up for after it,moreover ,the faster the conclusion you make ,the falser the conclusion will be.last but not least ,we should still think twice before action,it can never be too careful to make a conclusion especially when it is vital to you . To sum up,when making a conclusion,be careful encough as long as you can,because for some conclusion,once maken,can never be changed!
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