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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中有几处句子错误；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇，也能较准确地使用学术词汇。
As the picture shows, a man and a women are in front of computer, the man are writing a message to Andy, their daughter. Nowdays, with the development of economy and science, more and more people are tend to communicate by computers instead of face-to-face contact. However, opinions towards to this phenomenon vary from person to person. On the one hand, thoes who held the positive views think it is convenient , what’s more, it is also cheap for people who one is at home another in abroad. On the other, people held the negative views think that it could make people more and more indifferent, even cause it is difficult to communicate with others. As far as I am concerned, we'd better chose face-to-face contact, because others can understand your feelings in mind better, body language is also a way to communicate.
