一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Today is Sunday. I got up early. Then I help mother do housework. After that I doing my homework. Then I playing basketball with my friends. at night I am watching TV with my father until eleven o'clock, then I went to bed. But I can't asleep until one o'clock. So, what a fulling day.