2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；注意文中个别的句子错误；文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些学术词汇。

when at home, we always hear the communicates between our parents and other persons, we always listened carefully ,and sometimes we believed what they said is right , so when we are in trouble ,we were generally believed that no person is good person, we should depend on ourselves ,but you know ,trouble sometimes need others to help you then you can far away from it . At the same time, we will do what we see, but it is a error ,please not mindlessly to do. You should make a judge immediately. In a word, please not mindlessly to do what you heard and what you see ,this actions existed in fault, so it is no sensible to make a conclusion immediately to what you hear and what you see. Finally , I hope you can make sensible judgments .