2004年考研英语作文真题:终点又是起点

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As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing above,when a athlete is approaching the destination,a new start is waiting for him.He is faced with no choice but to keep running again.Under the picture reads 'the destination is a start too'. The potential meaning of the cartoon aims to remind us of the importance of the constant learning.As is known to us all that,with the advance of technology and socity,we are stepped into a new era of explosion of knowledge,which means that if we have the desire to keep abreast of or even supass our opponents we must cultivate the awareness of lifelong learning.Meanwhile,dilligence is deemed as the traditional virtue of china,which is doomed to yield great returns.By comparision,if we are toxicated with past achievements and reputations,chances are that we lost everything that we already have,let alone to be the backbone of our country. Take huluogen,an emiment mathmatician in china,as an example,he focus all his time and energy on his work all the time so that he make great donation to our country and also fulfil his destiny.Obviously,the more time we spend on learning,the more likely that we will obtain form what we paid.How magnigicient our life would be did we keep constant learning.