字数:200满分:100分
作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用学术词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing above,when a athelete is approaching the destination,a new start is waiting for him.He is faced with no choice but to keep running again.Under the picture reads 'the destination is a start too'. The potential meaning of the cartoon aims to remind us of the importance of the constant learning.As is known to us all that,with the advance of technology and society,we are stepped into a new era of explosion of knowledge,which means that if we have the desire to keep abreast of or even surpass our opponents we must develop the awareness of lifelong learning.Meanwhile,diligence is deemed as the traditional virtue of china,which is doomed to yield great returns.By comparison,if we are intoxicated with past achievements and reputations,chances are that we lost everything that we already have,let alone to be the backbone of our country. Take Huluogen,an eminent mathematician in china,as an example,he focuses all his time and energy on his work all the time so that he make great donation to our country and also fulfil his destiny.Obviously,the more time we spend on learning,the more likely that we will obtain form what we paid.How magnificient our life would be did we keep constant learning.