2004年考研英语作文真题:终点又是起点

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；可适当增加从句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing above,when an athlete is approaching the destination,a new start is waiting for him.He is faced with no choice but to keep running again.Under the picture reads 'the destination is a start too'. The potential meaning of the cartoon aims to remind us of the importance of the lifelong learning.As is known to us all that,with the advance of technology and society,we are stepped into a new era of explosion of knowledge,which means that if we have the desire to keep abreast of or even defeat our opponents we by no means satisfy what we did and should keep learning instead.Meanwhile,diligence is deemed as the traditional virtue of china,which is doomed to yield great returns.By comparison,if we are invariably intoxicated with past achievements and reputations,chances are that we cease to be in the possession of necessary science and culture knowledge,let alone to be the backbone of our country. Take Huluogen,an eminent mathematician in china,as an example,he focuses all his time and energy on his work all the time so that he achieves great success in his major field and also fulfil his destiny.Obviously,the more time we spend on learning,the more likely that we will obtain form what we paid.How magnificent our life would be did we keep constant learning.