字数:200满分:100分
作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇量积累不错,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;全文结构较为严谨。
As is vividly manifested in the drawing above,an individual is running,his body tired and a host of sweats droping.Instead of ceasing to advance,he continue to run.Under the cartoon reads 'destination is a start line too'. The potential meaning of the cartoom aims to remind us of the importance of lifelong learning.As we are stepped into a new era:explosion of konwledge,the lifelong learning is deemed as an indispensable ingredient to a successful life,which is doomed to yield great returns.Although learning in daily life looks like a trivial thing,it often occurs that a single unimportant event set up a chain of reactions which will bridge the enormous gap between dream and reality.On the countrary,if we are invariably intoxicated with past achievements and reputations,chances are that we cease to be in the possission of valuable opportunities to enhance ourselves,let alone to be the backbone of our country. Take Yangzhengning,an eminent phisicalist who achieve great success in his field,as an example,he reckon the lifelong learning as imperative part in his life and often work day and night,which is why he win the Nobel prize during his day and is poplarize the whole world.Undoutly,the more time we spend on learning,the more likely that we will get access to suceess.How magnificent our life would be were we willing to devote all our time and energy on lifelong learning.